Wednesday, February 11, 2015

Burning Bacon and Capitalization



The one thing that really popped out at me in this poem was the sudden all-capitalization of words such as HE, HIM, and HIS in lines 56-65. It reminds me of the Bible where God’s name is always written in all caps as an extra emphasis. In all likelihood, Brooks chose to do this in order to demonstrate the power the husband has over the wife’s life and the fear and dread that he instills in the wife. She is to the point when she can barely think about him as a person anymore, seeing him more as a vengeful god-figure who is to be feared and who she must prove her worth to in order just to survive.

Also by doing that with those words, it separates what how and what the wife thinks and does from the husband. “HE had mastered for the trial” (63) implies that perhaps the wife does not agree with the crime he committed and the things that he says or does. By capitalizing the word he, it emphasizes his part in his crimes and separates it from her. It further makes her as much as the victim of this man’s violence as the boy mentioned earlier in the poem.

1 comment:

  1. The capitalization also caught my eye. Not to mention line 83 which capitalizes HAND. I found this to be particularly important, symbolizing the power her husband has over her and her family, as well. Moreover, the hand may also symbolize her husbands say and actions related to the case. I did not know the historical background to the poem, since it was my first time reading it, but as mentioned in class, the mechanics of the poem make a significant difference.

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